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Dec 4, 2005 | 3:29 PM EST

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heya gyz this work is just a test of flash and its not completed or anything special. ive submitted it to ask for peoples opinons as to how i should changed it to make it more appealing. Theres no preloder and no sound files small enough.

Thank you =)

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HerieHerie

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

potential

I liked it, okay, there was no point in it, but you have warned us that there wouldn't be, so my overall judgement is, a lot of potentitial skills, i liked the graphics, i liked the style, add some sound, a story or some humor, and I will defenitly chek it out !

keep it coming


wolverinch responds:

thank you for your review.
as you know im jus playing with the program for now but i will definatly take those things into account and hopfully produce a decent flash film

so once again thank you =)


VeggieBoyVeggieBoy

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Hey, get the NG Preloader!!

There was only a few problems. There was not preloader or a 'Start' button at all. This was annoying because if people are multitasking, leaving it to load etc., then they need to be able to know they wont miss the animation. Bellow is a simple code which you can copy into the actions bar on a button symbol:

on (release) { gotoAndPlay (--); }

the -- is where you put the number of frame you need to go to. You can also download the NG preloader which is fully customisable too.

Anyway, next problem. At the beginning, i saw the white background. You probably didn't set the dimentions for your movie when you uploaded (just like my last submission). Well, it was good apart from that. Nice use of blur. Keep up the good work, and use all the tips people give to you.


wolverinch responds:

hey yes im aware that theres no preloder but i didnt see the need as the filesize was to small

however the button idea i think wud b a nice touch anyway thank you


wvjmaffwvjmaff

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good start

that was a cool idea. Now just buff up the animation, add sound, and you'll be ready to go!!


wolverinch responds:

thanks thats great to hear =)


SheriffBensonSheriffBenson

Rated 2 / 5 stars

meh

This should probably go in Alphas if unfinished. But as long as I'm typing this I might as well give you some advice, eh?

You can see the canvas at a few spots in the animation, so make sure you cover that up.

Also that dude's golf swing was really slow, speed it up. Also his arms seemed kind of weird.

Why did the ball become an oval before hitting the tree?

I liked the leaves falling down.

The ball fell down WAY too slow (into the hole) - speed that up.

Nice use of the blur technique though.


wolverinch responds:

o ok ye thx for that guess your right ill get onto it =)


CrAzYCreationsCrAzYCreations

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmm

well it made me laugh a lil. its pretty unique. ive never seen an advertisement on here before. lol. so its unique but it had no sound. if it had sound itd have a much better chance of staying on ng.


wolverinch responds:

lol thank you your right it needs sound =)