This actually acyually my first sk8ing short, thought i'd try them out and i think it turned out ok... you have to watch (it all the way through though) Enjoy!
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad kinda neat, could be better though just little stuff would make it better, like the animation portions and such, but it was a neat set-up and i was entertaining, just needs abit more effort and such, anyways nice job, keep at it...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and better animating...
~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could be better...
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^^Good Points^^
This is actually better than I expected it to be. The tricks were pretty cool looking and you animated the board pretty well. I liked the music too, they were both good choices and I liked how you cut it off at the end. I also liked how you looped it right into the preloader, that is a very unique thing you did.
^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really animate the actual boarder that much, which is really pretty lame looking. That is probably the reason why this is rated so low.
Amazing For First Time
Everything is good.
You should have the guy rockin his head to music at beggining.
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keep seeing the same background coming back is that normal,yhe move was okay seen better in other skate flash,but maybe your new to flash so ill just say nice try...
i had trouble even thinking of what to do with the background, so i just threw in a loop at the end, i've seen better myself but i've also seen worse... a lot worse... but isee what you mean, thanks for the advice.
Roudn and Round
Roudn and round and round the skater goes. Pretty short, but good length for a skater film. The Graphpics and Stle went well together, but you lost points becuase you didn't include any sound effects for the boarder. The music itself went well with the film though. The ending kinda sucked. Need improvment.
true, i did sort of space out on the sound fx, but i thought the ending was THAT bad, but w/e i guess if you thought so... i also can improve on the animating a bit, thats true...