((( CUTE )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was cute but needs more, it was very short only a few scenes and just a character or two, but i did get a little laugh out of it, add more to it especialy more backrounds...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this it was too short... Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute but too short of a flash...
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