Well done, guys
All of them were really good, I especially liked n00bqueen's one, very funny, and good graphics.
(How do I accept Multi-Author thingies?)
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I liked the RPG one. It seems that every single RPG is like that. The smiley face one was pretty funny also.
The emotional story wasn't too bad.
Needs more audio (sound effects, different sound tracks, etc)
All the stories (especially the third one I mentioned) got started on the right track, but more content in them would be nice.
yes rpg stories needs to be more inovative.
the sound is actually only music. it is infact a coinsidence that all part for this collection had it that was. usually only one of them are like that.
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lol i forgot link. ok well great job.
This was a new animation, but I don't think it will pass judgement.
I will refer to the rpg movie as 1, the smiley movie as 2, and the emotion movie as 3, to make it easier for me to type on this stupid laptop keyboard.
1 2 and 3 all had annoying grammatical errors. 1 mispelled inside and had punctuation issues, most of which I'll excuse due to the concept. 2 had trampoli then ne on the next line, and the bottom word didn't fit on ths sign. 3 had Why? am I alone, a lapse that makes the sentence difficult to understand. The jokes in 1 and 2 were not very funny, and 3 was too short. Animation for all three was very sub-par.
Note that I watched these once each, and they were so short I could nit pick each error and remember them all.
1 and 3 didn't have options to go back to the original screen, only replay buttons. Terribly inconvenient.
I can't say that you guys are good enough for newgrounds just yet... 2 outta 10.
to bad you didnt like it.
but il have to admit, there were quite abit of gramatical errors.
like the fact that the re-play buttons led back to the menu :p
also it passed judgement with ease so the long nose is on you :p
Liked all three of the animations. Pretty good work, very creative on all stories. Keep up the great work man id love to see more. Take care.
im happy that you like them, we all did our best :)