ok..
it was ok nice sound effects and animation but kinda choppy why do they start fighting again?
Author Comments
This is not my first flsh but it's my first stick movie, i was currently working on my second anime tutorial with flash professional 8, when my computer needed to be fixed so im on my laptop with the flash mx trial, because i wanted to practise, here's my first practise, enjoy.
Nice for a first movie
it was decent but really it was just a fighting animation.no point.
btw one thing you should work on is perspective that angle when the guy fell down was really awkward
first movie!?!?!?!?!??!!?
i like it!!! wow first movie you are good animator ^^
decent but not perfect
nice and decent but nothin specail
renember practice makes perfect
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
A decent stick battle, even the black and white is cool, allthough some color would be nice, the sticks are abit big but still ok, also the 3d like turning of the sticks was neat...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could give it a story other then just the fighting it will give the flash more depth, and some "COLOR" wouldnt hurt either, the sound/fx was cool but some "VOICE-OVERS" would improve on it...
~~OVERALL~~
A stick fight with some nice effects could be better though...
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