I give it three out of five...
The camera angles killed me.
I know you're working with a low budget, but you can still fake good production.
You've got the lightsaber effects down from the look to the sound movement, but what lacked here in my opinion was scene depth.
I could see where you were trying to be dramatic, but the angles you were using didn't do the scenes justice.
Try some worm eye-view p.o.v.s, or some shots where the camera moves with the person in a semi close up. If you put a little effort into it, the final product doesn't look as bad as you might think.
Over all I gave this one a three. I'll keep an eye out for part 2.