((( NICE PLOT )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was cool, i liked it more for the story and plot it really kept me interested and entertained aswell, could use more effort in detail and smoother animation, but for the mostpart i really liked it, anyways nice job, keep it up...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just details like in the backrounds and some nifty effects aswell...
~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash for a start, could be better though...
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