((( INTENSE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was intense, the animation could have been better, but the "GRAPHICS" and "ART" was cool, very cool infact, lots of great detail in the drawings you should title it "PREVIEW" so people have something to wait for or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation would be the most part to improve, it tends to skip and is really slow at times, like when the guys brain is splitting open right at the end it sorta pauses...

~~OVERALL~~
A great demo or preview but could use some better animating, cant wait for the full version...

~X~

ya got my attention

well, at first I thought...what the hell? the first part is kinda boring and pointless, but the animation gets nice and spiffed up after the eye opens. kinda reminded me of a flash version of "Evangelion"
though i'm still not sure what the hell spinal tap has to do with this, I'm curious to see the finished product when you get it all together.
not bad. has potential.

I have some things to say.

- I'm sure you've heard this from alot of people...
But you really should have submitted this to NG Alphas.
- If you really don't want people to look at it, then don't title it "dont look at this". That draws extra attention.
- The movie itself was pretty good... but there was no sound. It looked somewhat promising. The "Spinal Tap" thing at the end kind of threw me off a little... but what the hell. You can do what you want.
- Lastly, you shouldn't have submitted this for your friend to take a peek at it. Newgrounds is one of the most popular sites in the world and there are hundreds of people voting on and reviewing everything that comes through. So next time... upload your flash to a site like (imageshack . us)
(putfile . com)
or whatever else you can find.
So from now on.... please do not use Newgrounds as your tester. Find another place to show your friends flash.
I took alot of time to review this to help you out. If you want to give me shit for voting two, then you can be an asshole. But if you want to be civilized about it then just be happy I didnt say something like "O MG FAG FU CKNG FAGGIT!!! STUPID F LASH GHEY!"
~Jestar

Nice but....

Where's the sound? Re-submit it to Newgrounds Alphas if it isn't done. Waiting for the finished product.

~m_k~

not bad..

Since this isn't done yet, this really should of been submitted to the Newgrounds Alphas (if you are havingproblems finding it, go to the normal submit page and there is a link the top.)