well...

I normally don't like claymations. This one really isn't any diffrent. My advice is "Don't trust your flash player." Always upload it to another website and player it first with a copy of the NG window running allong with it to test it. just view the sourse of the NG flash window and paste it to a website with your info and stuff. very helpful actually. Now to the flash:

It was decent. not all that good but not all that bad eather. I don't feel this flash is ready for NG yet. keep trying you might get into the ranks of Knox one day even though claymations are lame :P

err...

I like claymations but this one has low quality and
FUCKIN DARK

I dunno nothing about clayanimations.

But what I can help you with is the preloader.
The preloader bar isn't showing, coz I is white. The background is white also. White colour doesn't show on white, does it? So paint the background darker, or choose another colour for the load bar for it to show up. (you can adjust the colour of the load bar by double-clicking the NG preloader, than unlocking the loadbar layer and paint it!)

Good one!

Good one!
Only thing, get better sound for it.
The clayguys move smooth, very good!

Whoa...

Easily the best claymation on NewGrounds... Animation-wise.

Nice job.