This is a prologue for a future work I hope to do. Originaly a comic book I created, I was hoping to be able to animate it as a cartoon series. I'm just not quite sure I'm good enough for the job, but we'll see, I guess. Comment if you think the series might be okay and if you are hoping to see it.
It needs alot of work.
it's ok, But it needs an immense amount of work. The sound was anything but good. work on timing the movements to sound. The background music was good. On the charecter himself i like the comic book like style of drawing but his movements seemed really clunky. Before you start research into smother animation flow.
okay
it's was nice,but the background graphics could be better.the music
was good it totally fit with the story.keep up the good work
TheSilverClaw
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WTF? sounds kinda like constantine but different...looks ok... but a little boring prologue. all it was ,was a monologue.
dude screw that last guy
i have no idea what the hell that last guy was talking about this shit is tight, the sound is a bit rough but w/e. last dumb as needs to learn how to spell to...w/e man i thought this was good
If you're interested in animating...
-You should really try acting out scenes as your charecters, recording the actions, then using that as basis for your charecter in flash. This will improve your timing tenfold (in particular, the slow-moving arms.) Not too bad.