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The Edibles

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Just a random spoof of "The Incredibles". Many apologies for the bad quality.. it messed up when I tried to transfer this to my home computer (this was a school project). My first try.. so be nice ^^;;

Many thanks to Kev, Monty and Becky and all my friends who were the inspiration for this crappy li'l cartoon that I love xD

Anyways.. enjoy!

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That was terrible.

Maybe that would be good for a school project, but there was no actual music other than the opening and closing. It was completely pathetic, with them just asking for pie and chili. The names weren't even clever. Dessertigirl? Just stupid. Spammy? Heard it a billion times. It didn't even spoof the Incredibles, which is a bad movie anyway. Seriously, when you put this on did you think to add speaking dialouge, even G-d forbid, some actual music? That was poorly done. I'd give it a B at a school, but a D- at Newgrounds. The almost funny part was when Monty or whoever asked to get hooked up, which was very non sequitor and random. That was terrible. Please respond, and it was constructive criticism, ok?

A good start!

Speed it up and make it look better!

Hilarious, if you're 6.

"Oooh, can we get CHILI?!?!"
"Ooooh, can we get PIIIEEEIIEEI!!?!??!"

...

"Oooh, can we click the red X in the upper right hand corner?"

Corny. Slow-moving, drags on forever. Riddled with lower-level Wierd Al Yankovic-style food jokes (might have guessed from the title). Yawn.

Hailz-06 responds:

Thanks all. I appreciate your comments and suggestions.. I just want to remind everyone of something before the same things are repeated again and again.

Yes, it would be better with voices, better graphics, etc. The problem is this:

This was a project for school, as in, I don't own Flash at home. I only had a certain amount of time to complete what you see here, and so of course there will be some left to be desired. I figured, hey, if I have to do all this for school, "I might as well post it somewhere so all this work doesn't go to waste."

I do appreciate your suggestions.. but lighten up a little. It's supposed to be stupid and funny in a ridiculous way. Can't one post anything silly without being slammed? :P

well

it could ce better the graphic is okay,but its just a ripoff from the incredibles and that the reason for the low score,i think...

okay

well, your efforts were good in this one... though i didn't care too far much for this one.

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2.14 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 9, 2005
6:30 PM EST