Progress
This is not bad, really. I saw your previous stuff and I'm very pleased to see that you took some of my ideas (blood and army uniform stuff) into consideration. I enjoy that sort of contact with the author very much!
Apart from the wounds, I also like the cigar very much! (it wasn't in the previous version if I'm not mistaken?)
I see that you plan to put in a female version in, this is a good idea in my opinion. I kep saying that giving the figure legs and adding a "zombie-green" skin option would be cool.
A technical note - make the gun overlap the shirts and not the other way around like it is now. Now you cannot make the figure wear a shirt and have a gun at the same time as it is the shirts that displays on top. Its hard to describe, but try to run it ourself and you'll know what I mean.
Overall I must say you still have a long way to go, but you are definitally making progress. Do not give up! I'll be keeping my thumbs!