better than that banana phone post. i guess i just dont get your sense of humour. to british. could of done better, like maybe a moral at the end would of been nice... dunno like short cuts always beat full out cheating... but thats not realy funy either,actualy thats one is crap, but stil you get the point.
the main issue with both your posts is that there are no twist, nothing actualy happens, every one knows the turtel wins, but maybe for once in stead of him being the good guy, and the rabit evil, trie the other way round. poor rabit.