To the portal: day 1

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www.omglaserspewpew.com now open!!!

arrow keys: move
spacebar: jump
Hopefully there will be 5 of these games, and they will get better with the more I make don't worry. The storyline is on the loadscreen. In day 1 you must get past 2 worlds in 10 levels. i know it's easy but hey, it's something to do! Please leave reveiws, I will respond to all of them.

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booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dont make antother


its goooood make a nother one


this rocked =] maybe make it so you get a rating at the end from how fast you fineshed , worst being turd of the week and best being front page or somthing like that


This is kind of fun. Nice idea, but bad graphics. Try and make the .swf file a vector image, and better preloader/menu.

Also have a reward, like..

'You are now reviewing your .swf file as you have made it through the portal'

And have an awesome Flash that someone can make :)

mooseisloose responds:

I cant do that kinda of rewrd until the fifth game. im working on the second one now, its far better

A good start... not very challenging.

OK, most of the time i would give a short review here, but this game could really be something, so ill try harder.

Graphics (6)- The graphics were pretty solid for a flash game, but i think it would have been better if you would have animated the sprite. Also, the backrounds could have been varied a little more.

Style (7)-I liked the whole style of the flash, but once again, i think the backround could use some variety.

Sound (6)- The backround music was ok, but u lacked sound effects when the sprite jumped, when it landed, when you went through portals, ect.

Violence (1)- It didn't really effect you if you fell from huge ledges... it would be cool if you added health and enemies.

Interactivity (7)- The interactivity was ok except all you could do is jump... it would also be nice if the traps varied a little bit.

Humor (5)- The whole idea of this game is pretty funny just because almost everyone on this site must have gotten something blammed at some point.

Overall (6)- Its a really great game overall and is well thought out, but it can be even better. I hope you try to take some of my advice, and keep working on it. Its a really great start.

mooseisloose responds:

Thanks, a long and very halpful reveiw. I will add more features and such as my actionscript skills progress.

Credits & Info

3.16 / 5.00

Oct 29, 2005
10:36 AM EDT
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