its not much
ok it needs alot of work mondo work that iz, and u gave it all u got. but u should put some way past effort into it. gotta juice
Hey all of my fellow newgrounders,as u can see This is my (FIRST) Movie submitted on NG. If been Animating for 4 weeks now..so i hope you like it and leave some revieuws and dont forget to vote =3
its not much
ok it needs alot of work mondo work that iz, and u gave it all u got. but u should put some way past effort into it. gotta juice
pretty good for a first timer......
not a bad flash for your first one. keep up the good work. u have tallent, now make it better. i think u have th skill to do so.
I expected more...
As a Sonic fan, I always expect to see good stuff from other Sonic fans (which doesn't happen all the times)... and this one was above my expectations.
Ratings:
- Graphics = 6 - It's a sprite movie. Nothing that is there was drawn by you. However, it was smoothly animated;
- Style = 5 - Sprite movies are common. And this one didn't have a plot (at least, I couldn't see one), and the animation goes black in a certain point...;
- Sound = 5 - Music fitted well... more sound effects would help. Also, the music stops when the black screen appears;
- Violence = 0 - Not exactly violent;
- Interactivity = 0 - It's a movie!;
- Humor = 0 - Not exactly funny;
- Overall = 5 - Needs improvements. And an ending. Or at least a sequel, so that people might understand the plot (if there is one).
Downhill
Started off great, thought ti was quite entertaning.
Then what happens? it stops?! Screen goes black and... thats it?
allright
it wasnt good, but it wasn't bad i guess