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1 Hour Challenge 2

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www.omglaserspewpew.com now open!!!

The second in the series, this time done in more of a collab style, with me, devenger and flash_man04. What happens is people send movies/games to me that they must make in an hour, then I put them together, include one of my own and wa-la! Remember, everything you see here was done in an HOUR. please leave reveiws thanks!

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okay...umm...what?

okay, i honestly had trouble finding enjpyment in this, mainly becasue there was no evidence that anthing was happening in the swordfight thing.
and also
it's not 'wa-la' it's voila (a should have a squigly thing above it)
anyway, if you do this again, try to extend the time limit to like...2 hours
or 2 days or soe reasonable amount of time

Gah!!

I have reviewed all your works so far. They are somewhat mediocre but decent for an inexperienced flash person such as yourself. All you need to make every single one of your submissions better would be MORE TIME. By more time I don't mean an extra hour on a one hour POS, I actually am talking about days or even weeks here. There are steps to making great flash and I will list them for you just so you don't make a fool of yourself in the future.

1)Brainstorm: Think of an idea and expand on it...hands away from the mouse!! Good now write it down on paper, think of how to expand and elaborate your idea so it is better.
(This step should take a day for a large project or a couple of hours for a very small project.)

2)Make a rough draft: Forget about fancy sounds and things for the moment they can be added later. Does everything work? TEST IT duh! If everything is all set you are ready to move on.

3)Polish it: The animation may be a little rough or just downright horrible. Touch up the animation as needed and test again. Looking better? Good moving on.

4)Make it fancy: Now you can add all sorts of BG music and little sound effects. Polish it up so you sync the animation with the timing and such. Good job. Wait not quite done yet!

5)Look it over: Did you miss any minute detail, forget to add some actionscript that was crucial, wanted to plant an easter egg? Get on it!

6)Submit: Now that you have followed all the steps and you have some good quality work you can submit it.

That was it. I hope your future work is terrific and not just mediocre now that you know what to do.
(I apologize now if it appears that you have been in any way flamed, dissed, abused, ect. It is not intended to be a mean heartless review, just a simple critique.)

YAY so much FUN.

I liked the ecape artist. If it only takes an hour, make 24 more by tommarow, i'd play them all!!!

mooseisloose responds:

lol I'm gonna start the series up again soon, i've been very busy with my site and some cartoons I have been doing

who cares

listen dude,congradulations that only took you an hour to make,but sereousely,those games sucked,next time,put more time into your work.

mooseisloose responds:

who cares? I care fool! if i put more time into it that would defeat the object of it lol

Ugh I can't get it working!

I can't say if it is good or bad. I don't know.