Hmm...
Nice movie. It looks like it would of been hard to make, a few tips though:
*Clearer sound
*longer
*game(if possible)
*please can there be a conclusion passage
But it IS an OK movie
Author Comments
Hi, i made this for Nintendo-gaming.nl (dutch gameswebsite)
Explenation: A girl who worked there dissappeared, she didn't came online anymore.Our webmaster made a whole story about it, and i made it a serie.He's the detective in the story and WvA is another webmaster. ****Watch part 1 if u didn't******
Clean up your grammar.
Some of the stuff I read in the clip could have been written better. Flash wise, it wasn't blam worthy.
Err...
Ok... 'suppose... Bit short tho and not really anything happened
2/5
what's the idea
what's the idea
Anchorz responds:
raping ur mom
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