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the legend of RyQ

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well this is and animation , i make this the last week whit kuramathebad . well this is a shit well , just see the animation

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yes, in the intro it was fine, but in the animation it needed some work!!!

Alright submission but grammar needed some work scenes were well done on this

This is fairly good for your first submission.

One recommendation: get somebody to proofread your grammar. I am guessing that English is not your first language, and on a somewhat serious flash like this one, good grammar counts.
On the positive side, that fight scene was impressive considering this is your first. Also, that sound effect at the end was pretty funny. I wouldn't mind seeing the sequel.

yusque responds:

ok i will do

Lol the cape got me

nice.........it was nice but the characters were moving too slow tho >_<.. it was cool tho keep it up

yusque responds:

ok

needs alot of work

in the begining the text is off the screen, and learn how to spell. and it was very slow. fights need to go much faster than that.

yusque responds:

ok but wait the second part if will be very good

Credits & Info

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2,192
Votes
13
Score
3.52 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 19, 2005
8:27 PM EDT