((( NEEDS WORK )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was a good start for your first, needs some upgrading though, first off i would like to pointout that it needs some maor compressing, you should never send a file that large if its your first, and it needs more detail and more effort on all aspects from backrounds to the main characters...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well more effort more detail, more effects, The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users
do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...
~~OVERALL~~
A good start but needs major detailing...
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