((( FUNNY )))
This was funny, and i must say you did put lots of good effort in this one, the characters, to the decent anumation, i do have a question, is that dog a pig/dog ?? haha, anyways good flash with good story...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the voices were abit low, maybe you could make em abit louder, and another idea might be to add some subtitles, it will help since they do talk abit low...
A good little animation with nice characters and a good storyline, cant wait for more...
Way too many "to be continued" animations on Newgrounds these days, why the f**k can't you people just finish it off in your own time, and then upload it? I'm sick of these half assed story's that aren't going anywhere, so people add a "to be continued" and hopefully that will make it a bit tense?
oooh... yeah, i'm just dying to know what happens next.
This was a poor animation, graphics were the best thing going for it, the actual animation is lacking big style, why did you upload it? Why do people sit down, make some rubbish animation when they're bored, and then upload it for thousands of people to see? JUST F**KING FINISH IT, and then upload it!
Still, it's not worth a blam, I just hope you don't keep this up. Think of something, write it down, or draw up a storyboard, from start to FINISH, then work on the actual animation. Don't sit down for an hour, cutting corners in your animation and think "wow, this rocks!" then uploading it here. I don't want to see this, i want to see finished products, if you did this whilst bored in class, then finish it off the next time you get bored in class.
thanks for the "constructive" criticism! I'll work on my animation for the next part, and the next part after that. I'll keep up my original idea of having it in parts. Thanks again!
The fact that the preloader didn't have a "Play" button angered me, and the fact that you said you made this when you were bored made me think it was gonna be crappy. Pretty good humour and style, I liked the graphics, keep up the good work.
Nice Work :)
When Is The Part 2 going to be out Please Respond
Soon, now that i know people liked it
this is a good one, this this is gunna grow into a pretty funny series,