((( SHORT )))
This was ok, but seemed very "SHORT" the character was ok, and as for the backrounds, well there could be abit more depth and detail to it, as for the "JOKE" it was funny but the flash can be longer, to have more jokes and stuff...
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Author Comments
Thanks everyone for the good reviews
but hey its done now so i can sleep soundly.
Enjoy the flash and make your own
Frogcloset responds:
your the only one they picked up the shortness most people got bored of it
thanks for seeing some longevity to the story
