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Well this is my My latest creation took me some time and effort to get my self back in the seat again. It was intended to be entered in an festival but i missed the dead line so well enjoy... Yeah i know its short, really short.

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therookie responds:

Wow ... how constructive

cool one

a little short overall, but the action was pretty good in this one, highly entertaining and near perfect drawings. the drawings in this animation were just awesome. you have awesome drawing talent, i look forward to seeing more flashwork from you soon.

Too short

This was an excellent flash in terms of graphics, and actual animation, but you should have fleshed out the story, and the fight scene. It was far too short. The moment the viewer begins to understand the fight, you end it.

Nice job, but try making this longer next time.

therookie responds:

Thanks, good advice ^^ My next movie is longer and even got an better story ^^ i think you will like it even if the style isnt well like this ^^

that's not very nice Mr. christmas

I'd like to see you make a beeter flash there Lloyd, it but it is kinda short. althought I kinda liked it.

therookie responds:

thank you ^^ well yeah the length is the main complaint about this animation. I think i have gotten the point by now. so next one will at least be 21.3 seconds long what do you say about that :P

Bad, just bad.

That was a waste of 20 seconds. Nothing special about it at all.

therookie responds:

actually it was 19.3 secs but whos counting... dude please give a better review i dont know what to improve if your just gona diss it