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Lil Religions Ep.1 (BETA)

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Oct 16, 2005 | 5:18 AM EDT

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THIS IS A BETA RELEASE. YOUR INPUT CAN HELP IMPROVE THIS ANIMATION.
** Please tell me what i should add/remove in detail **
On April 17th, i submitted a script to the Flash Troops forums, as an idea for a cartoon series. It wasn't until i got a project to work on a film, that i realised that i would get time to work on that animation. Practically 6 months later, i have the BETA version completed.
And i submitted it here for....public input. ENJOY!!

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Dark-orchestraDark-orchestra

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

pretty funny...

i like that "Do lawyers and repo men get to burn small, innocent children?" line. Satans pretty cool... but i must ask... why is god such a priss???


RWS responds:

It was part of my reson to start the project... I just thought it would be funny if the worlds most worshipped god was just this bigass nerd. I mean, can't you just see one of those stereotypical science nerds, creating some sort of scientific life form, except make him the 'creator' of human life?


Ssilver7Ssilver7

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good Job Ralph

Well, I pretty much covered it already.

Good Job.



OutLandishOutLandish

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

dont put (beta) just to sound cool

especially when your cartoon is so humiliating


RWS responds:

alright, i don't know what part of your review to tackle first, the actual review or the person who wrote it?
#1 i didn't put "(beta)" to make it sound cool, i put it there to make a point that it was incomplete, dumbass, which leads me to #2 wouldn't a BETA release of an animation be humiliating? i mean, it's not like "OMFG, BETA", it's like "hmmm, yes, beta, i would like to help improve this submission"

Don't waste your fucking breath on me you jackass. I don't normally speak to anyone like this, but your head must be a brick, and needs a jackhammer to explain things to you.

If you don't like what i have said, email me: ralph.mail@gmail.com
I'll be glad to settle any problems you didn't understand about the REAL animation world. Because, obviously, Newgrounds is probably the only animation world youve encountered, youve never actually met and animated with professional animators, because it really sounds, and looks, like all you have is the final product you bias yourself with.


VercadesVercades

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Scooooore!

Interesting flash concept, I could see this in a series. And, I wouldn't mind seeing more of this cause it seems like it's from unbiased view.

What, I'd like to see in the next series is more time/effort in the character designs, it'll pay off in the end. You've already got a decent concept to build on and your art is the only thing that is holding it back.

Subtle jokes, in the background are always a good thing to add. And the sound/voice recordings were nicely done, as for the voice talent maybe make Satan a little more inhuman? Just a thought.


RWS responds:

interesting comments you have. Theyre not bad.
As for the 'unbiased view' comment, i reckon it's partly true, but then partly false. In the end, i just want to pull the joke on all major religions, so im biased to be atheist...which is what i am, an atheist.
As for your art comment, i agree, i actually have some awesome character designs, my main problem was transfering those drawings from paper to computer WITHOUT a scanner or tablet.
Subtle jokes: I thought there was plenty of subtlety in this particular episode, i mean "S.T. Peter", who could he possibly be? :P and what about the 10 commandments breaking in 2, who wouldve thought it happened because God was in a hurry and ran into Satan?
I definetly need to get better recordings of the voices before i tackle the proper episode.
The inhuman voice for Satan DID cross my mind when i was recording his voice, i discontinued the idea for several reasons, #1 was mostly he was a kid, and getting an 'inhuman' voice came through "satanic puberty"
#2 was i tried heaps of times to make the voice sound inhuman and sound like a child as well, but i never succeeded.


DarkValentinDarkValentin

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Well....um..

the preloader was actually the ONLY good thing about this movie...but still...┬┤the preloader was awesome, now, just make a good, and funny movie, where the voice-acting, fits to the time, where the people talk, and make it more understandable.


RWS responds:

well, geez just stab me in the heart with a stake why dontcha, i mean, this IS a beta release, i think i realise it is imperfect, and i want people to give me ideas on how to improve it, not tell me whats wrong with it, i dont need you to tell me that, and otherwise, i already have them all under control, so this review hurts me.