cool
i liked the loading screem, that was cool. is that white thing manga? if it is, thats very good drawings. u should send that to a recording studio, they could use it as a music video!
Author Comments
PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE YOU REVIEW...I prefer constructive critisism please...This was a final for my video concepts class, it had to be a commercial...and i also made it my 1,000 hits thing for my DA account. I know it is kinda bad quality, cause i made it in after effects and then i put it in flash so i could upload it. for those of your who don't know, after effects is a movie editing program, i DID NOT MAKE THIS IN FLASH!!! it was standard 720x480 high quality movie file, i wanted to uploade it so it had to be in flash, if i new how to import movie files without making it look like crap, believe me i would have...
Ayakochan responds:
the white thing is an onigiri (riceball) its a type of food in japan ^^ and thank you for your comment ^^
Kawaii!!
Looked really cute and cool!! I liked the style but obviously there wasnt much plot or anything going on. I'd like to see more stuff done like this if you can write shorts or just make a music video. Not sure who'd go to a martial arts class with that little character representing them though!
Ayakochan responds:
lol i know, but i wanted it to be a cute commercial, it wasn't meant to ever be real anyway X3
Pretty Cool
I like the effects included and it has a pretty good border too.
Nice Job
Ayakochan responds:
thank you for your comment ^^
Annoying.
I dunno, not my cup of tea.
Nothing new or original.
Boring!
Ayakochan responds:
i dunno..this is the first commercial for a martial arts school like this i have ever seen >.>
Kawaiii^^
Well, that white thing is cute^^. And congratulations for the 1000 hits. Drawings are very good, and the animations where fine. It's short though, but I don't care, cuz it's good enough.
Ayakochan responds:
thanks, the white thing is an onigiri (riceball) lol ^_^