I could bomb this, and my right mind tells me to, how ever, I did laugh pretty hard when I see Link, the silent hero, go "OH SH*T", so I gave you some good points. You did well, and better then a few of the jerks who don't have flash videos on here. Here is some advice, speed things up a bit. Oh and also, the boomerand, did really, that is asking for some alstrailian quote or something.... HE KILLED ZELDA WITH A BOOMERANG! Call here a kangaroo or something! But good in all, speed up the text, maybe use the "newier" zelda music, and... well.... make another. GOOD LUCK BUDDY!