uuh ia made this while i was bored, I took it from a illustrated jokes book
((( COULD BE BETTER )))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation, its just ok, needs more to it more art detail like on the characters, and i would even go as far as to changing the music that just wasnent fitting right with me, also more effects in the backrounds would be neat, anyways good luck...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better music, more detail, and longer if you can...
~~OVERALL~~
A short animation but needs more effort and work...
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Good, waiting for the remake
It was so ironic, hahaha. You said there was going to be a remake, and I want to suggest that you make better drawn characters and stuff. And a less repetitive music. You could add more to the story, cause its too short. I liked it very much
yes, I'm remaking it, but im kinda bored with it
I liked it
But I dont know why
more work would be great
behold the story of my life, anyway the idea was great, but a little more thought into the specifics, more elaberate drawings, and maybe some color and this could be really good.
I'm remaking it, with no colors, that makes it more cartoonie
LOLz
nice joke, but you need to work on your drawing skills.