((( THIS WAS NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cool notbad at all good "GRAPHICS" great looking characters, and awsome flash, allthough i thought the color could have been focused on abit better, nice work though keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Deeper colors and better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Great flash with awsome characters...

~X~

Awsome

I loved the graphics and the fighting ideas. The only thing that worried me was the lack of sound and music. I think that u are a really great artist and could make some really outstanding movies if you added sound. But this movie is most definately a 5/5

Seems like it could have been so much better.

Your artwork is very clean, but some of your proportion is really unfortunate. Excellent woek on the characters and a few of the effects like the pillars exploding.

You really seemed to be lacking in the music/sound/and voice department though. The audio for this was really really nonexistent. The only audio I heard were a couple of looped impacts, some simple explosions, and a gunshot ricochet.

You're doing great, and I don't want to downplay how good your artwork is in general. You have some work to do, and I'd really suggest teaming up with someone to do the audio while you do the artwork. Other than that, great work, Peace

Just a few things

The artwork is the strong point of ur flash,but the animation is bad,they almost don't move,and the sound is very bad too,try get it better,(like the part of gray hair guy kicking,the sound was the same and it bores),the scenarios don't help too much,but the battle was alright and the lady is a great character...

...but i think u can make next episode better dont u?

Seriously that was homo.

I'm not even trying to be insulting here. This is the gayest thing I have ever seen on Newgrounds. Am I missing something here? I was most seriously and honestly expecting some anal action.