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A Teen's Story

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Its about a kids first party and what happend,

It was origianlly just me messing around with mouths and shit but then i thought i might as well submit it and give some people a laugh! Hope you all like it

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Oki

It was decent. The graphics and animation are really a few parts of this that need improving, and there needs to be sound as well. Other than that's it's overall a decent animation. Keep going!

-cd-

((( ABIT SHORT BUT OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, seemed abit short, and lacke din backrounds, but you did present some nice art detail like with the main character and all, also lacked in backrounds thats something you should have had atleast a base color besides the white, anyways it was a funny short flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland... All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble... I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A short f and backrounds...lash with some good skill on detail and characters but could be better with time

~X~

hahaha

that was funny. Marinize legaulana. Where was that song from and who sings it I like it.

well...

that was actually a lot more funnier than i thought gj.

Harry responds:

WOW REALLY THAT MAKES ME FEEL ALL WARM AND FUZZY INSIDE
(fuck u)

it was good but you good have made it show more

good but not long enough. the graphics were good and the music was good but should have been more than just a boy speeking

Credits & Info

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4,418
Votes
24
Score
3.40 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 9, 2005
12:40 AM EDT