An amusing day in the park with a couple of generic characters. This is not made with excellence in mind, but rather to prove personal effort and ability.
It's my first and only work as of yet; more might be forthcoming as time and skills permit.
Who knows... I might even make a personal appearance in this one.
Nice!
I did not expect that nuke at the end, heh. The guy on the right was, well... kinda right (no pun intended), there could've been more. I also liked the song at the end, too. Great job with the fourth wall breaks. Suffice to say that it's pretty good :-)
8/10
5
THE GOOD
That was really freaking funny dude. One of the best animations I have ever seen. Surprised I am saying this about your first flash. You dont need great graphics. This was good because it had some of the funniest diolaugue I have heard all year. You even pointed out the bad things about your flash. Now that takes guts. Also the end was very actioony.
THE BAD
The people had no legs for one thing and never actually moved their bodies. A horrible attempt at tweening mouths. And the graphics are defiantly not very good. Oval shaped heads. What were you thinking. Also the end was much to loud. Maybe a little to actiony. I know since its been 5 years since you have made a flash but I still hope you make another one. Or that you even still use newgrounds.
suck it
ur right...this did suck
Decent for a first try
You didnt do well,but you didnt do bad,but the end actualy makes it worse.
it would have been funny...but it was stolen
If it wasn't stolen then two completely different people had very similar ideas,which can be pretty creppy ig you think about it.