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Keep a open mind, theres no point whatching this if your just gonna take in one side of the arguement.
There is english subtitles at the bottom of the screen, voice's arn't my thing.
((( STRANGE )))
Well this one was strange very strange infact, from the music to the simple but poorly made characters, just not sure what to say about this one, something differentnext time...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm well better detail, some shading and different colors,a nd better fonts...
Well its strange and poorly made but i supose some liked it...
It was pretty good, but it was kind of weird.
what was with the weird wheels that said obey.
i see you took my suggestion of the subtitles! very good... maybe a lil less time in between sayings... i like your style... i would say add hands but then people would bash you for a madness knockoff or something like that... keep practicing and if you need any idea help hit me up i chock full o em ;)
There wasn't any plot, everything moved too slowly, your boring characters took you about four seconds to design. and i give you a D+ for spelling and grammar. Waste of time.
By the way, that last line should say "It's only an idea," not "It's only a idea."
Spend some time on something and then post it.
you sed: "It's only an idea," not "It's only a idea."
I say: oh no! i missed out one letter, like it makes a difference? twat
was that dude...
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