An improvement of a blammed Flash, the original was deleted 0.04 below the required score, so I thought I may as well try it again. I wasn't sure how to improve it because I tried pretty hard with the animation, but I hope I made it a little more interesting.
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~~REVIEW~~
Haha made me laugh abit, i was like "OUCH" at the end of it hehe, seemed abit short and i didnt really understand what was going on like who are these people why did the one guy let the other guy push him?? heh well it was funny...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and some voice-overs from the characters would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
Short but odd toon, may or may-not give a few laughs...
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All true. I was playing around when I made it, which is really what most of my submissions are. I really don't know if I'll ever make something with an actual plot and storyboard...
I'm playing with lip syncing and voices atm though, so expect some of that in future submissions.
Thanks for another decent review.
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Made me laugh, isn't the best graphics but the way you put it together made me laugh (the ending :D)
Thanks, I guess I could have tried harder with some of the graphics
What?
This...flash...needs...a better name. Ham Abuse? The sound isn't that great. Graphics are good, but could have been better. You have a lot of potential and enough skill to do better flashes...keep workin on it. Nice try.
lol, I couldn't think of a relevant name and I though Ham Abuse sounded funny. You should have suggested a name yourself in the review, I can still change it. Thanks for the positive feedback.
Why
Why do you post this CRAP again
EAT 2.0/5 NOOB. you don't indicate that you have ever used flash before in your profile and your level 2 so you obviously have no experience of animating or the flash portal yourself. That's not to say people like that shouldnt leave reviews, but if you are leaving a review it has to be helpful, point out what needs improving and what doesn't, read the rules of reviewing on the FAQ and get some experience on the portal before EVER leaving a review again.
It needs a lot of improvement...
like a story, for it to get protected.
rate movies on quality of animation, then downgrade it if the story sucks. don't vote 0 just because if the story.