Very good
The whole "down with development" message was communicated well. I also like the bird ^_^
Author Comments
This is one of my first flash movies.. Everything on it I drew by hand, scanned it up and converted it to flash to animate, i hope you like it!
THATS RIGHT!!!! down with urbanisation
This is superlative.
You have captured the dread of the horrid bird by showing its emotions whilst still leaving mystery.
The hidden message of urbanisation drestroying the environment was ever so subtle and was clearly showing a new perspective towards future generations thinking in the context of helping mother Earth.
good work.
((( ITS OK )))
This was ok,, the "B&W" Style was cool, could use abit of color though even just abit of color would make it neat and more enjoyble, The "MUSIC" was great though, really set the setting for the content, could aos use more scenes more content and such, for a better overall outcome, anyways nice work, keep it up....
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Raw talent
The tessellated pattern of the bird gave it an ancient and timeless feel to the bird. The video gave me a sense that the bird is like the silent observer in the modern industrialised society of today. Clever use of audio responses to cue visualisations. I really enjoyed watching your “afimation” LaRJ, good work mate.
LaRJ responds:
thanks alot man, i dont really understand half of your vocabulary but still thanks for the the good review?
LOVE the art style
I fell in love with your type font at the end, and the style was pretty good. Very artsy. If there was a message I missed it, but a great submission. This dick ---\/ doesn't kow what he's talking about.
LaRJ responds:
thanks alot, i like my style also... the mssage was basically a lonely bird in a dying forest he plants seeds to rebirth the forest and then he has a friend bird at the end