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Phoenix Feather Continues. But in a whole new way!!
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Well its notbad, has a few things it could work on such as "SOUND/FX" and Effects in itself more detail and just little things that make a flash better, but most of all you need to cute the "5-MEG" file down that was just too much...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the file, that was way big for alot of us...
Notbad at all could be fixed up abit better though...
Looks like DBZ
Nice idea, the drawings are not too bad.
Make some sound effects, that would be better.
Meh. Not that good.
It looked like a bad DBZ remake. And I hate DBZ. The music was really annoying, and the graphics were pretty crappy in the sense that the lines were extremely thick. Try to improve these thing and it would be ok.
Very cool! Make more! I love the intro sequences!
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i like where you're going, but it's rather hard to pay attention to the story...i mean there was a huge gap between the second and third chapter, and an even huger gap between thre 3rd and fourth.
why was shark mad at the whale? what happened to the feather? how exactly did shark and phoenix meet up in the desert after chapter 2? are shark and phoenix brothers? just a few question. maybe add a chapter 2.5 and 3.5 to add more story to make it more interesting...and i wouldn't mind a prequel to find out what's so special about this legendary phoenix feather.
other than that, i loved the voices, although at first i had my doubts. good job with the whole series.
Shark was mad at the whale as he threw fish guts in his face, the feather was pulled back into the earth in chapter 3 and phoenix met shark in the desert when he found shark being attacked by the mercanary "Deathwing".
I hope this answer you're questions.
Thanks for your review!!!
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