((( NEEDS LOTS OF WORK )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok but could have been much better, you had an ok idea but it needs more effort and you need to learn to compress or cut it down in parts, that would be the first step to a better flash...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the 4 + meg file that was abit much...
~~OVERALL~~
Very big file which was not needed and seems like not much effort went into this on your part...
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