((( NEEDS WORK )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok for one of your first flash's but could use more effort all around, the animation could be abit smoother, and more detail and effort in the graphics is needed aswell, nice try though, hope to see improvements sometime...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, more detail and most of all more time and effort before submitting...
~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash just needs more time and effort throught the film...
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