((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it had alot of interest for me, it the story i mean was really good, and the detail was notbad either, i would have liked to see more like in a continueing story or something, the size was abit much though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat,...
~~OVERALL~~
A decent story, has lots of promise for future works...
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