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I got bored and and came up with this idea from some where cant remember where.I moved away from stick men like i was told to and I hope you like it its a bit short because i cant do animation with mouth lol.
Both comica and dramatical . . . the graphics and animation could use some improvement though, and it really needs a lift in sound, but other than that it's a great idea. Keep it up!
((( TOO SHORT )))
This was just way to short seems like it would go better in a colab of some sort, just not by itself, as for the flash it was funny kinda hard to understand what was being said so maybe some subtitles, funny stuff though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit hard to understand what was being said by the characters, so i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" to know exactly what the dialog is, it will improve on the flash, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...
A very short short, funny but short...
Nice little flash you have here, keep working you show promise.
Graphics: Great to see that you have moved away from sticks, you show alot of promise in the graphics department.
Audio: The audio was quite off sync in alot of places, you may want to fix that up.
Keep up the good work
Nice job. I wasn't expecting that ending and I laughed a lot. Graphics were nice also. Only bad thing was the sinc was a little off in the beginning
1- moving away from stick figures is ALWAYS a good decision...
2- you should make it a little longer... and perhaps try to sort the timing of the joke a little better... this joke was very cool, very funny... but maybe a bit longer watching the peasant standing there... a bit more animation on the sword swing
3- don't fade groups with multiple instances in them... you can see through one instance into the other and it destroys the effect... If it must be done either use tinting effects or make a "fader symbol" that is all one color (black or white usually) that sits on the topmost layer and fades out... giving the effect that your animation is fading in.
This was pretty funny... :) The politeness of course, when discussing who will kill the peasant... but the guesswork is funny. At first I suspected that they were lined up to kill a dragon, and when I saw the peasant I thought he was the next in line.
great job :)
an animation about the /v/ board on 4chan.
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