Jot + Jab Episode 2

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Thus begins the "Choastomy Bag" trilogy. I hope you enjoy these relatively short films from 2000-2001. They are all available on my DVD, but they each have some scattered interactivity online, too. Enjoy!


Another great movie!

Of course, that's what I've come to expect from you. This one was really funny. "Mouthwatering pinecones..." That was hilarious!

MMmmm pinecones!

dude, that was totally hilarious! you really have some great writing going on with this series. the reflection of the news chick with his eyes... GENIOUS! well done, i'm looking forward to the next one!

Simply great.

I really liked this movie, it didnt amaze me however. It was certainly worth a watch from anyone looking for a good movie to kill some time watching. The way everything was done in a slighty unorganised way, but it was still good, and easy to follow. It was definitely a different type of movie than you usually see on newgrounds, and i liked that about this movie. Well heres my review.

The graphics were good, not quite great. You have the basic skills of drawing, effective detail, colour, and obviously the actual animation. The drawings were drawn well, in a sort of cartoony way. But the detail wasnt the best it could have been, i mean it was decent, but try a little harder next time. The drawings were a bit rough too, work on those too if you can. The animation was good, you did a nice job oh showing the expressions and emotions. The style was great for a few reasons, i liked your animating style despite its unpolished look. It could be something you get to be known for later in your career, so dont change it! The idea is pretty good, fairly random but in a good way. Also i kind of enjoyed how it was a little bit of an interactive movie! The sound was great overall, nice sounds, very good voice acting, added a lot to the final product.

Overall this was a very nicely done movie, it didnt quite reach the amazing point, but it was good anyways. I hope you can continue to improve your skills, and submit another great movie to the portal soon!
~Two Thumbs Up! 4/5

It was ok.

It was an ok film. All it needed was a bit more graphics.


2 things
more jot and jab
RAB episodes!!!!!!!!!

i think i might grad ur dvd for that missing rab episode, what else is on the dvd?

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3.75 / 5.00

Sep 26, 2005
4:18 PM EDT
Comedy - Original
  • Daily 3rd Place September 27, 2005