((( NOTBAD ABIT DIFFERENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad it was abit different, some of the "FADING" effects from one scene to the next was nice, and as for the "MUSIC" it gave it a dark and creepy feel to it which was notbad, good characters and the whole using of the "SIGN'S" was cool, a decent flash done here...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices would be cool, maybe abit more animations with the characters themself...

~~OVERALL~~
A strange but unique flash with some dark music and scenes making it something different but neat flash...

~X~

UMm hope your not getting paid

Ok... just some tid-bits. First off "its work in process" no work in prgress. 2nd drawing messy and bad animation. 3rd Hope your not getting paid for the tv spot.

THINKBOX

WERD A BITE!!

this is like the thing that I never understand sorry but nice graphic

well....

It was going good, then it stopped. Finish it up and resubmit.

50-50

i rate this 50-50......
need's better music. also speed up the pace it makes it more enjoyable.... also you should make them fight for something(like bullet-proff-monk in that they protected a scroll.)
hope you like my ideas :)