pam pam weak song pam but hey Manson??? lol *haha*
Yep, you should work on it... anyway, the idea about Manson was great, I laughed out... XD so dude, 9/10, for this idea, you deserved it ;)
i guess i have to say this wasnt too great but the concept was good. i say you should try with a sequel. good luck if you do
this is....strange. great idea, but it didn't ryhme that well. but this still brought a smile to my face.
it was interesting to me >.>
I really dident like it but if other people like it i must have bad taste or something...