((( AWSOME GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Awsome graphics, reaally good effort with nice detail and great shadowing, the animation was decent, seemed abit slow though, the characters were decent, and the flash overall was decent, i was well entertained with the flash from start to finish, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great flash, maybe abit faster animating like when the girl is moving along, and more animatin on her limbs and head...

~~OVERALL~~
An outstanding flash with tond of detail, cant be missed a must see by all...

~X~

My Thoughts Are....

The script wasn't logical or coherent so it could have been longer to actually make the story that way...Hey Devnill I can help ;-)... I felt the girl needed a face but other wise the graphics were pretty good. The CC was a great idea. It could have used some music in the background and maybe some more expression in the voice over...I know you can do it victus =-)

Hm

This was like little kids stuff. Why did you put it on NewGrounds...

uhhhmmmm.........

well... the animation kinda sucked.... there wasnt any point ... somthing about a little girl.... idk... i got bored and just clicked off...srry to say but... blam this piece of crap......

i see...

okay, slightly disturbing but uhhh.. yeah pretty cool