((( GOOD ARTWORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had some really impressive art work, very amazing at the characters, the pressing of the button everytime did get abit anoying though, explained below, anyways great animation hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button

~~OVERALL~~
A reall awsome art detail flash, very impressive, buttons tend to get anoying but overall an awsome fash...

~X~

cool one

a neat little teaser you got here. looks like this one has the potential to be a great animation, and if you work real hard on the actual animation, it could easily win an award. i look forward to seeing it.

good

sound really like poetic flash,nice flash

Damn click click

2 things i cant stand on newgrounds, stick flashes and constant clicking, i know you can hit tab and enter but still annoying

not bad

his clothing looked weird though