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Blind - part 1

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This is my second real-drawing creation I've ever done. I'd like to go on with te series, so I hope this won't be blammed.
Comment are welcome, cause I want to learn flash better. :D
Hope you enjoy!


Thank u for all ur comments. I'll maybe try adding voices, my prob is just that I need thee right people to add some cool voices, cuz I don't ant them to be bad for the characters as well. :) I'll try to improve the sound as well. I'm definitely going for part 2 now. hop it'll live up to expectations!


about the story, some liked it allready, some do not. I hope those who don't like it will like it in part 2. :)

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TO THE GUY BELOW ME

The movie is called Ichi, its a series in japan, he's got a cult following. Theres tons of films about him and a series. Not ichi the killer. But Ichi something or other

Slein1 responds:

I didnt know about Ichi, although there are tons of series/movies with a blind person in it who is still very strong. So I know Im not very original. :P I still did it for learning flash better. And btw, its so hard to be original with all thats around these days. :P Ill do my best anyway... :)

good but needs some work

Ahhhh this is killing me, theres a really good film about a blind samurai who fights by hearing and i cant remember what it is!!!!!!
I agree with SLUGFly on most of the points he made. Primarily about the voices thing, i think it was a little odd to have a silent anime movie. Also about writing '1' in the subtitles, that makes it seem less serious in my opinion. Apart from that i thought it was fine, i like anime movies, you can follow them easier... well i can anyway.
Yeah good work man, ill look out for a sequil.

Nice

Nice one there Niels, I think it's a good animation.
Yet it really need voices, and maybe some more music, cuz music is goood ;) Nevertheless it's still pretty good.

*Dit is Robin trouwes, de broer van Remy. Alsje denkt mijn voice nodig te hebben vraag je t maar ;)

Slein1 responds:

k zal erover denken, maar k zal zelf denk k iig hoofdpersoon inspreke. k check de rest nog wel. bedankt voor t aanbod iig. ;)

not bad, not bad...

Not bad at all. Original artwork is a good thing. The story is intriguing. Angles and transitions add merit to the visual storytelling. Violence plays a beefy part with minimal blood. Music and fx were good enough. It's just so hard to get over the lack of voices. Submit more!

nice

i liked this a lot i can see real potential in the story. I just wish that you gave the characters voices. I think that this would help your flash out a lot. Again, good work and keep them coming :)

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Sep 20, 2005
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