ok.
it was ok, but needs a lot of improving. the animations were pretty bad, as the characters didn't move their limbs.
the graphics were good.
the flash needs improving overall (voice acting would be great, for example).
Author Comments
After making basic, I thought about updating the graphics a little bit and a little smoother fps. I was going to ad voice acting but then decided not to because this wasn't long enough for voice acting. Hopefully the next one will have voice acting.
This movie is short and most music wouldn't import. So I shoved The Pillows music in it. FYI I like the revolution control but I can still make fun of it.
((( NEEDS MORE TIME )))
~~REVIEW~~
Needs nore time and effort, add more effects and detail, it was ok but seems abit sloppy and not very well presented, size was needing some work aswell, more effort is needed...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, more effects, and more of the little stuff that makes it something neat...
~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but needs more time and effort...
~X~
woot.
I wish i knew when your stuff came out... cuz yeah. but yeah! cool deal. cool deal. think simple will become slightly difficult, and then pretty hard, and then explicit detail, and then 3 year-long movie production?
Koji98 responds:
My friend and I were joking about something like that about 5-6 months ago. Also I'm working on a Basic 10 which is about done. All that's left is if teh voice actors want to change some lines and redraw hell. Give it about a week.
Nice short movie
I like your animation style, the only thing that brought it down was the background music that sounded like a terrorist crying
Dude, not bad.
Ok, not bad not bad. It WAS short and a little random but hey, everythigns a bit random now and again. And not to rain on your parade, but you should spend a little more time considering which music to add. Even if it takes a bit more time to figure it out when it's being a bastard. I've been there done that ;). So keep trying. .....Seriously. Dont use that type of music...please.
Koji98 responds:
I spent an hour trying to get this really kick ass song that went really well with the flash. Saddely it never uploaded itself onto flash and gave me an error message every time.