Well, I know this is not an excellent movie, because I'm still basic on Flash. I did this thing to my girlfriend, it actually shows what I was feeling when we had a discussion. It's more like a romantic video clip. I think girls will like it!
((( NICE FLOW )))
~~REVIEW~~
This had a nice flow of animation, the "CHARACTERS" were decent could use more work though, but for the most part it was a good flash, really nice flow, nice job hope to see more soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in color like shading, like when you do a close up of the guy the colors are abit bland, might be something to work on...
~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash, nice flow of animating, some decent animation here, keep it up...
~X~
Hmmm....
Next time, use the paintbrush, and don't shape tween something like that rose, and make it go faster in some parts....I LOOOVE the bit about him talking to the sun, it was so unexpected I laughed so hard! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Summing it up: Nice humour, slow, animation was crap, and that was seriously an incredibly gay song.
Well, at least it's practice.
it was cute
i love it
thanks guy!
I'll improve it!
You'll improve
This was nice.
The end was timed perfectly. The art was.. cute..
Now for the bad stuff...
You have to play to your strengths and not let your shortcomings sabotage the movie. You don't know how to animate walking at this point, yet you had about six seconds of a... shall we say ... no.. let's be honest.. extremely bad excuse for walking. The character didn't glide, he shambled. You could have don a close-up and NOT shown the feet, or superimposed the flower and body getting closer.. but what you did almost ruined the animation.
The bit with the talking sun... pointless and detracting. IF you are going to throw comedy and randomness in, you have to work a bit harder. The sun was in the film from the beginning, and then you turned around and pointed out that it was not real... BY INTERACTING WITH IT... If you do something like that, you should either go all the way with it (have the sun leave the galaxy and freeze the earth) or bring the joke to a completion in SOME manner.
Keep learning, PLEASE keep creating.
Oh, thanks for the tips!
I just wanna say that I'm beginner on flash. And that I did this movie kinda in a hurry, because I wanted my girlfriend to see it soon.
The "sliding" thing was on purpose, to look idiot that way, but of course it would be more interesting to make the guy walk. ;)
And about the sun... yeah, you're probably right. =]
thanks for the review!
I'll keep learning as you said, and i promise I'll make some good stuff in the future.
Thanx!
I think I'm a girl...
No, just kidding.
But I like your movie, the guy before me already gave most of the advice I wanted to give you, so there is just one thing left:
A better (or atleast 'a') walking cycle would be great.
Hope 2 see more work from you!
Oh, thanks for the tips!
I just wanna say that I'm beginner on flash. And that I did this movie kinda in a hurry, because I wanted my girlfriend to see it soon.
The "sliding" thing was on purpose, to look idiot that way, but of course it would be more interesting to make the guy walk. ;)
thanks for the review!
I'll keep learning, and i promise I'll make some good stuff in the future.
Thanx!
