Lacks imagination
To be honest, you could do better. There was no depth or imagination in that cartoon at all. It didn't make me laugh, It didn't impress me and the guitar bit pissed me right off.
Please try better!
Author Comments
This is a funny flash. this is about a worm named Tommy. and he smokes and he drinks lemonade. and he the coolest worm i freakin know. this flash has orginal song and music my moe taylor and billy woodward! THAT'S WHAT HE DOES!!!!
i am tape worm tommy!
AHHHHHH THAT'S STUCK IN MY HEAD ANNOYING SONG!.......good job otherwords....i am tape worm tommy!
AMAZING!
THIS WAS THE GREATEST THING MY EYES HAVE EVER LAYED UPON! RIGHT NOW I AM HUNCHED OVER IN ECSTACY OVER THE EXQUISITE GOODNESS OF THIS CARTOON! IT IS LIKE NO OTHER....NO OTHER EVER IN THE HISTORY OF TIME! BRILLIANT! GOOD JOB OLE CHAP!
Splendid
Perfectly Executed.
gogomoe responds:
thank you. i work hard on this