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Still In Love.

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Hi, I listened to this song, and thought gee this might make a pretty good flash. So here it is, I worked Very hard on this. and I hope you Like it. Just thought i should try a love flash.


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((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad sortga like a music video, first off i would suggest add some "SUBTITLES" to the clip, as it would improve it for the viewer viewing pleasure, but anyways, the art was decent kinda neat actually, but the "MOUTH" animation could be better looked funny, anyways nice animation, hope to see more from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better animation with the mouth, Voices were not bad Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat music video with some neat characters and funny story to it...

~X~

nice

I really liked it, nice job.

wtf! this shit suckz!

this piece of bloody crap dont deserve no shit but a zer0. i dont care if this has some conditionz this fuckin bloody suckz!

Yeeees

Hey, it was a well done flash movie, even if it gets boring after a while, it´s better than my crap, byt try to do something more funny bext time, and I promise it gets better!! (^_^)

funny, but I'm not sure how much was intentional

Things that were probably unintentionally funny:

1) The guy's got his hand on his crotch at the beginning
2) The girl looks angry (or possibly constipated) the entire movie
3) The lipsync
4) The way the guy's mouth occasionally drifts off his face
5) "UN ENPLOYED"
6) The contrast between the scene with his shirt off and the other scenes
7) That kiss at the end

If they were intentional, you deserve a lot higher than a four for humor, but I think accidental funny is only worth half points.

The lipsync keeps going in and out of sync. The mouth shapes look pretty good, they just seem to be a fraction of a second off most of the time. But not ALL the time.

It was ... okay. It definitely doesn't deserve blamming, but I doubt that I'll ever watch it again.

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Sep 16, 2005
2:26 AM EDT