This is my first flash ever. So, the animation isn't great, seeing as the majority of the time animating, I was learning the program. Also, towards the end, I really just wanted this thing to be finished, so I rushed it in some parts. Anyways, thanks for watching, I think some people will enjoy this entry. We'll see, and if anyone has any constructive critisism, I am all ears. Be on the look out for future entries, as my partner in the cartooning biz and myself will be releasing some better written, and hopefully better animated material. Thanks.
((( NEEDS WORK )))
~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm what to say, it was interesting, the "ART" does need some improving though, and more "SOUND/FX" wouldnt hurt either, good luck...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the art and backrounds, add some sound.fx maybe even some backround music for an overall better effect...
~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash, abit confusing but interesting could be improved, good luck...
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fucking hilarious dude
wow i cant believe this only has a score of 1.80. All these fucking newgrounds nerds are just shitting theire pants cuz the animation isnt the best, but damn that part where the cookie goes "hes a douchebag" just the way he said it made me laugh so hard i almost cried.
damn! that was real good!
i think that this was better than so much flashez ive seen in a long time. this is your first one too! all that needs improvement is the end. i kno u were rushin, but its jus that i wanted to see steve have revenge lol. it wudve been much better if u expanded.
I probably will be rereleasing this flash with better sound,easier to read subtitles, and an expanded ending. I'm just not sure at this time seeing as the 1.80 score isnt exactly setting newgrounds.com ablaze. Maybe if it catches on, and I see better responses it will force me to improve on this submission. Otherwise, I will just consider this project a lost cause and move on to something else. Thanks for the positive review!
ok
i actually wanted to give it an 7 but when i look at my marks for the other things, such as the sound, i change my opinion, any way i no how to make it better, its not your mike it how its set up, if you email me ill tell you how, and!!! u can find my email in my profile ;)
I would appreciate the help man. I sent you an email, so hopefully your advice can help me out here. Thanks man.
ehhhhh
Ehhh, that was crappy, bad and disturbing.
What the fuck is wrong with you??
The voices sounds crappy, shit man!!!!!!!!!!!