nice
better than me.. for now...shoulda made something thats stupid in it like a really long farting scene from drawn together.
Author Comments
this is my first flash application. i had fun making this, and look forward to having it judged.
RikiKazuki420 responds:
nah. drawn together sucks.
i'ts an ok attempt
it could be a bit longer and culd potentaly be good but u need to make some improvements.
for example-
u could se sonic after he fell
it was a bit julty mabye change the time between frmes ect.
and it was a little to short.
keep trying though!
Uh
I'll try and be as helpful as I can with this review. The start of this flash wasn't really all that.Mega Man caught the guy and he ran, it's a decent start. Once Sonic popped out, it looked like you just stopped because the animation was broken apart to the point where there were several-second gaps in between actions, which was very annoying and definitely not what a sprite flash is supposed to be. Plus, you could still see Sonic when he "fell". Not the wrost flash ever, bu ta lot of improvements need to be made.
((( DECENT )))
~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, but needs more, not sure but maybe a mixture of sprites and flash art characters, also the music volume was abit low, it was ok but could be better...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sound was too low raise it up abit...
~~OVERALL~~
A funny sprite flash, could use some work though...
~X~
RikiKazuki420 responds:
~~RESPONSE~~
your review was ok, but it needs more, like these little shits who constantly demand more and more, not caring if it's good or not.
~~THINGS TO STOP WHINING ABOUT~~
turn your damn speakers or headphones up you deaf bastard.
~~OVERALL~~
you just review everything without really caring what it is, don't you?
~RK420~
Not only did you give a bad name to sprites...
...you gave a bad name to Axel F! >:(
RikiKazuki420 responds:
i'll punch you!