that was cool

I liked it :) If I may, a quick suggestion, maybe have the clouds change shape as they float by (and definately not just appearing on screen) and perhaps changing shape more slowly.

not great

very short and not very exciting.... hopefully the V1.2 is better and fixed up.

garbage, with a couple shape tweens.

This should be deleted, since you submitted the same thing twice in like 5 mins and called it v.1.2

This is for children

This would be the kind of thing a 4 year old watches.... honestly i just wasted 50 seconds of my life watching that and another 30 doing this review. But its your first time so keep going man, try somthing with action or somthing.

Hint: TARGET AUDIENCE

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hated it, but i rekognise the conkers music.